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A Drink Drug Drank By Nutrimentia - 03/28/01 - 00:00:00

It all begins
a harmless perusal
brown
clear
red
beer
Heart rhythm jazzes down
What? Where? When? (Now!!)

I sense the sation
feel the pride, hubris of indulgence
Anticipation of the crack
- of a seal
- of an ice upon immersion

it comes
A wavy scent of heat on a highway
assault the sense of taste, smell, thought

whee-la!! we’re drinking……..

A tiny sip
roll it around
taste buds dance, eyes roll back

A swallow, gurgle, choke, swallow
inebriation initiation

find a way
-fly a way

coursing, crazing, cruising, crashing
alcohol fucks you up./

I refill my glass
but it empties again

The better I get, the less I can do
funbling, bumbling, tumbling, boom!

What is it about alcohol that pulls, pushes, drives me?
- I like to smoke pot -- more in control
- I like to trip, LSD, shrooms -- learn much more

An alcoholic high is pure indulgence
--There is nothing to be gained or utilized from alcohol (escape ? (maybe!?!)!)!!!

What is it? = evil incarnate!

I’m not a god fearing man, but of what’s available in my repertoire, I’d have to say that alcohol is the devil’s sputum.

It is human foible distilled (!!!)
-How much is enough? too much?
and released

I dunno…… I’m drunk by now!

(There is no blood but what the gutter gives)

 
A Drink Drug Drank by Nutrimentia - 03/28/01 by T H E A S Y L U M - 2001-03-28 23:07:00
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RE: A Drink Drug Drank by Roshigoth - 2001-03-28 23:08:00
Umm... yeah.

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RE: A Drink Drug Drank by Goatboy - 2001-03-28 23:13:00
Bad poetry is bad poetry however you like to dress it up.

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RE: A Drink Drug Drank by Nutrimentia - 2001-03-28 23:59:00
It's not supposed to be poetry you know. Its drunken writing. Its different.

Redguard write prose thats more poetic than prose. Feral writes poetry that's too poetic for me sometimes.

I don't claim to be a poet, no sir.

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